I am still working on my chapter 2 and just finishes the characters (I hope). This is really big to me. I started this since I was middle school. But at 8th grade, I had to revision the storyline again and needed time to think for one in a half year for a new storyline. It was my half life's work. After working on the plots, characters, chapters, history, and what knots. I have to edited the chapters to make sure it made sense. But I was not going to give up. But from all of this... My question is... Is anyone reading my story?
I was a little discourage about no one is reading my story expect my friends. So... if you have time, could you please take a look at my story. I need your opinion. Thank you for your time!

Laters!
P.S.
Can you leave message if any errors you see. Thanks.
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ab aeterno, ad infinitum. [link]
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I will get something to show on my gallery.
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Check it out!
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